Here's a clip of a rewrite for chapter 2 of "Equestria: Civil War". I decided to go through with the idea of having a new character take on much of Celestia's position and lines, so as to keep the harshness necessary, but keep Celestia in-character.

Here it is:

“Aww, don’t be such a frowny-puss!” Pinkie chirped. “I don’t think it really was that bad!”

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A new chapter of "Equestria: Civil War"!

Also, since we have new character tags now, Moon Dancer is finally among the story's tags, so searching for her will yield this story as a result. Hope you enjoy!

Chapter 8 of E:CW is here! Check it out!

Here's another section from chapter 2:

“Twilight, I haven’t truly had any regrets in helping you realize your potential as a princess until recently,” Celestia continued. “But recounting all of these events, both before and after your ascension, I believe you are a bit too comfortable with your own friendship lessons to know the difference between friendship opportunities and actual threats to Equestria.”

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LINK to "Equestria: Civil War" on TVTROPES.ORG!!

It's not much, and they misspelled my name, but still! I find this awesome! I think I've made it at last!

Stay quick, stay sharp, and thanks for reading!

Chapter 5 of "Equestria: Civil War" is now up, as are the rewrites to chapters 2, 3, and 4. Thunderbolt has taken much of the rage originally given to Celestia, and the Princess is now calmer and more unbiased. Hope you enjoy!

Stay quick, stay sharp, and thanks for reading!

"Equestria: Civil War" has now begun! Choose a side!

(Artwork by arcanelexicon! Thanks again!)

Also, the twentieth chapter--TWENTIETH!!--of "The Phantom Pony of Everfree" is up. Go read when you get the chance.

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